Thursday, April 9, 2009

moon rise


a cat yawns
i catch a glimpse
of the moon/jm

bubbles of moonlight/jm
carp rise to greet the sky/ws

snow green eyes
spring mountain moon
pulls us higher/ws

John Merryfield
William Sorlien

5 comments:

John Merryfield said...

You have the honor of choosing a title. I have the honor of knowing you my friend. Thanks for the moon renhai.

bandit said...

I hope you don't mind but I messed about with the rhythm-posted to the party.

John Merryfield said...

oh, very nice!

T.Migratorius said...

Wow! a very nice collaboration!

Gillena Cox said...

very nice collaboration
happy Earth Day, John thanks or stopping by Lunch Break, i'm adding your haiku to the sequence

much love
gillena